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Love


Love-A razor blade
Cutting deep into your heart
Even deeper into your soul
Bleeding you of your life
Sharp edges imperfecting you
Changing you
Turning you into something you’re not
Sharp edges stinging you
Making your eyes water in pain
The razor blade is thrown away
But then there’s nothing left
Nothing to feel
Nothing to think
Numbness takes over without the cutting edges of the blade
You forget what it was like to feel the sharp edges of the blade
You forget what it was like to love
©2007-2009 ~kyonarubabe
:iconkyonarubabe:

Author's Comments

I was about to go to sleep one night and the first line to this poem just POPPED into my head! ^^ How weird is that? LOL

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:iconbloodyredwater:
you are so weird EM. lol. love ya though. you do creeily nice poems in a weird sense. lol. how do you suddenly come up with a line as you go to bed? lol.

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My only goal now...is to live.
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My scars remind me of things in which I can not forget. To forget such things is to forget life itself...Who wants to forget life? ...not I...not I...
:iconladyismay:
This is really cool =) love it!
:iconkyonarubabe:
Thank you thank you! ^^

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[(It's not the first time i've been alone...Don't worry, I'm not sad)]
:iconkyonarubabe:
DUDE! I know. It is so weird. But it's so kewl!!!!! LOL...so it's like...weirdly kewl! LOL...HAHA! But ne way..i love you!

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[(It's not the first time i've been alone...Don't worry, I'm not sad)]
:iconbloodyredwater:
love you too girl!!!! lol lmao. lol

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My only goal now...is to live.
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My scars remind me of things in which I can not forget. To forget such things is to forget life itself...Who wants to forget life? ...not I...not I...

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